I am a Year 4 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teachers are Miss King, Miss Scanlan, Mrs Adina and Miss Heger.
Wednesday, 19 September 2018
The Three girls in candy land
Once upon a time there lived three girls, one of them had big long frizzy hair, the other two had long straight hair. Their names were Lama,Tawana, Naomi their house was a very lonley cottage. It was in the middle of the forest all alone. The cottage had one kitchen, one bathroom and shower. They all had to sleep in the living room. There was no bedrooms. One day they said” we want a new exciting cottage that has the kind of rooms we want in our cottage. One sunny hot day Lama went to go pick some berries for some berry pie. She looked up and saw this staircase in the middle of no where. Lama ran back to the cottage to tell the other girls Lama said to the girls” I found a staircase”and the other girls said your probably dreaming.” So Lama went back to Location and went up the brown coloured pavement of the staircase. It took her to the place she always wanted to go that was candy land. She wanted to stay for the rest of her life. Back in the cottage the two girls said to each other” may be she was telling the truth after all,we should go up the staircase.” Then Naomi and Tawana came upon a big pavemant staircase they said”may be she went up here let’s have a look. They went up the staircase it took them to the candy land Lama was jumping on marshmallows cloud.” Then they all stayed in candy land for the rest of their lives.” They made themselves a nice cottage that was made out of nice crunchy crackers. Then they put some soft caramelised chocolate on top of the crackers. After they made the cottage they went to got swim in the yummy chocolate fall. Then they dried themselves on rainbow strips. Every thing was incredible in candy land. Then they Kept doing the same thing everyday. Finally they stayed in candy land and never went back to their small,old, lonely cottage again.
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