The first thing I did was iPad games. The iPad games on one of the iPad games it was dominos it was interesting to watch. The dominos ceped hitting objects. There was a wheel and axle there was also a inclind plane. It was incredible.
I made a squiggle twirly marble run tower. I did it with Eva my best friend. It was speedy and so fast that we could not catch up. It was exciting just waiting for the marble.
We colourled part of the marble run red, green, yellow, black it went loudly and exciting when the marble went down all the tubes. The colours was amazing. I even wrote my name. I had so much fun because it was the best day of the week.
Hi Tawana,
ReplyDeleteI love your story. I especially like the way you have used creative adjectives to describe the marble run. Have a think, What will you did next time you write to make your writing even better? Great work this week Tawana. I am extremely proud of you.
From Mrs Carruthers
Thank you mrs carruthers I will try harder next time.
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